Today， I went hiking with my friends. As we traveled for some distance， so this time we could see the different scenery. At first， we decided to see the sunrise， but all of us missed the perfect time， so we changed our plan， we decided to watch sunset. We took a visit of the moutain， as the high altitude， I could see the full view of the city. It was so beautiful， especially a long river walk around the city. When it was going to be dark， we saw the sun running down the hill， it was so red， as it was burning. The sky first got red and then the clouds made up of some animal shapes. How interesting it was.
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今天，我和我的朋友去徒步旅行。当我们走了一段距离，所以这次我们可以看到不同的风景。首先，我们决定看日出，但是我们错过了最佳时机，所以改变了计划，我们决定看日落。我们游览了这座大山，由于高海拔，我可以看到城市的全貌。它是如此美丽，尤其是一条长长的河流蜿蜒在城市间。当天暗下来的时候，我们看到太阳下山，很红，就像燃烧。天空的云层首先是红色，然后变成一些动物形状。那是多么有趣。